Class Feedback

Week Four

16.3.15

In small groups of four we critiqued everyones spreads far. The feedback I got was that the Salsa one was the strongest as the people stayed anonymous whilst still creating a feeling of rhythm and movement from the feet. Still needs development but I also now need to bring this direction into the other activities. The movie night spreads were too literal, especially with the film. The loose curvy line links to the feeling of the destination but doesnt need to be film. Also need to change imagery to make it more anonymous without faces. The cuba st market needs work. I need to show the idea that the market is not just about food, its about going and having dinner with friends for the catch-up and also the sense of community within the market.